Bryanna Krieger 10/30/18 Creative Writing Horror Story It was dark all I could see was a small red light that would start blinking every two minutes. It felt like it’s been an hour now. I tried to get up, but I was tied up to a chair. I could feel the tug of whatever is holding me. Finally, the lights turned on. I saw a red substance dripping down the walls and It smelt terrible. Through the window I saw a man that was staring at me. He spoke “you have two minutes to figure out how to get out.” I heard a scream there was a little girl in a chair by me. I saw a key I reached for it with my foot and got it. I unlocked myself then the little girl. She acted weird I saw the door was unlocked so I went to it. There was another room I turned to the little girl who was gone. As I went more in the room, I heard a voice it kept saying “mommy where, are u?” This freaked me out. There was a note on the table it wrote “round two my pretty friend.” I couldn’t figure out what to do but then I saw a puzzle. I put the pieces together. It was a picture of me and my family expect my mom and dad were crossed out with x’s and I was circled. I then saw the girl again but, she had a big round smile she then said, “do you want to play with me.” She said that over and over, but her voice kept getting deeper and louder. I saw a door, so I decided to run to it. I opened it, it was a hallway. As I walked down it, I heard screams and cries for help. I could feel the fright in the screams and the pain in the cries. When I finally got to the next room. I saw words on the wall “isn't this fun.” No, I said to myself when all a sudden the girl was back, she ran at me, she was screaming your just going to become like the others one of my many toys they all tried to leave too.” I ran trying to find somewhere else to hide. All a sudden I tripped but as I was falling, I saw a room, I got up as fast as I could and ran to the room. Once I finally walked in the room, I heard a man's voice he said, “wow you made it to this level well my pretty this is the last room it’s not an easy one either.” All a sudden, lights flickered so much I couldn’t see that well I grabbed the wall I was ready to get out of here. There was the girl she was back she started to hit me and yell tag. I pushed her off me the all a sudden the lights when red. I could feel it she was mad. Out of nowhere a bunch of doors were shutting and opening. I noticed one door that was staying shut so I ran to it. When I saw the man inside it was my boyfriend... “Chris” I said in shock “Well you caught me I was hoping to bad, this is the end.” Then he pushed me it started to get dark... The last thing I could hear was a deep evil laugh. *Chris Perspective* It was finally done she was gone, I couldn’t take her judgmental eyes or her rude personality but when I turned, I saw the little girl who had help me. She looked at me then said “bye bye mister” and then she screamed at that moment that I knew she was sending me to the under world....
Student's Choice Reflection 1. List one thing you’ve learned from writing this paper that you can apply to other writing assignments. What will that look like? I should give my paper more detail and it will be scarier.
2. Identify a specific revision you were asked to make and explain why (this can be at any stage of the writing process). How did you revise? What did you learn? I was asked to think more about what could happened. I learned I could make it more interesting.
3. What are the conventions of an Writing essay and how did you meet those in this assignment? To put effort and use your head a little I made weird and random plot twist.
4. Given more time to work on this assignment, how would you improve it. It probably would be a lot more scarier and longer.
5. What is one thing you’re proud of in this paper? The way everything started to come together and writing it.